Tag: Writing

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This week for writing we have been learning how to write a narrative. Once we knew how to write one Miss Cadigan gave us three characters, three items, a setting and a problem. When we had finished writing our story on a google doc we had to write it on a piece of paper with halloween decorations around the border. I think that my story is more funny than scary.

Do you know how to write a narrative piece of writing?

Zoe

My Term Four goal is to be able to improve my handwriting for when I go Totara. I think I need to fix my handwriting for when my teacher has to read some stuff out of my book.

I think trying to make my writing neater will be a bit hard because I write super fast

I think once I have gotten neater at writing It will be easy

I will hope to keep neat handwriting for the rest of the year.

Last week for writing we had to write a persuasive piece of writing about if we should have five or four days at school. I thought we should have only four days at school so teachers get a break from teaching, we can hang out with friends and we wont talk to our friends that much because we got to hang out in the weekend.

I found writing one of my reason a bit hard because I didn’t know what to type.

I found the rest of my writing easy.

Next time i’ll think of different reasons.

Do you want four days at school?

For writing we had to persuade Miss Cadigan to choose our doughnut so the class could make them. Eli’s and Willow’s got chosen. I had Eli’s, his was a chocolate doughnut with sprinkles and two white chocolate buttons, it was delicious. I was going to have Willow’s but I don’t like berries and hers was a berry one.

I think Eli’s was the best.

In writing we had to write a piece of writing why you think that people should wear a uniform when you read my work please tell me if I could have done anything different or better? While I was doing this activity I found writing in my book hard because my hand started to hurt it was really easy to type this on my computer and next time I hope to do it quicker.What school do people get bullied at?

In week ten term one we made a recipe on how to make tacos! We had to include everything that we needed it took me 8 steps to include everything even the enjoy part!

I found writing the instructions a bit hard but typeing it was really easy!

Next time I will try not to take that long to finish the taco recipe!

Let me know what I could do next time!

This week in Mamakua 2, we had to write a piece of persuasive writing.

I enjoyed typeing my writing!

I found it difficult to write about my piece of writing

Next I time I could write about somthing else that I know really well.

Do you litter?

Last week we had to write information about Hawaii!

I found the introduction easy and the paragraphs kinda hard next time I want to try and add more information! I learned something new!